Monday, June 15, 2009

सफ़र...




Though there are 4 topics still in pipeline, which includes one poetry as well, this one popped out from somewhere. I scribbled and thought to put. Have a look, here it goes..



जीवन की आपाधापी में, सपनों को छवि तो दे देते
क्या करना था, क्या करते हैं, इतना ही तुम बस कह लेते

निकले थे, सफ़र सुहाना था
था अपने साथ ज़माना था
बाधाओं के सुर में हरदम,
लगता हर गीत तराना था

अब आज अभी, इस वेला में, तुम लेखा जोखा कर लेते
क्या करना था, क्या करते हैं, इतना ही तुम बस कह लेते

जाने-अनजाने लोगों का,
जब साथ मिला तो डगर मिली
सोचा तो पहुँचे मंज़िल पर,
जब आँख उठी तो नज़र खुली

कब कहाँ गया, कुछ कहाँ मिला, अपनों से मेला कर लेते
क्या करना था, क्या करते हैं, इतना ही तुम बस कह लेते

जब आये अंत सफ़र तो बस,
आँखों से आँसू ना छलकें
दे जायें जग को ऐसा कुछ,
ढूंढें तुमको हरपल पलकें

वह गया डगर, पग पड़े जिधर, चिन्हों को गहरा कर देते
क्या करना था, क्या करते हैं, इतना ही तुम बस कह लेते

11 comments:

LET IT BE JUST ABOUT ME said...

Wowww u made some changes in u'r blog !!! I like it !!! keep up :)
Cheers !!!

ashkd said...

@ Shakhnoza.. thanks.. :-) you came here after a longggg time.. and your blog still doesn't show the pics.. be fast.. :-)

this one is my mother tongue hindi.. you read the one in English and do let me know..

keep writing..

All Talk and No Action said...

kyaaa baat hai !! :)

Real Nice one

ashkd said...

@ Mukta.. thanks :-)

countdown reaches to 8 days.. go.. :-)

All Talk and No Action said...

Maula Maula is a Fab song !!

ashkd said...

@Mukta.. ya.. it affects my deep in heart and let me feel more strongly for the almighty.. :-)

All Talk and No Action said...

a few v good songs that bring me closer to the almighty - O palan Hare, Khwaja mere khwaja, sukh ke sab saathi...

preposterous girl said...

Hi Ashwini..
Beautiful poem..very motivating also..
I love this word "आपाधापी".. I dnt knw y..
Thats y I loved the Harivanshrai Bachchan's poem with the same word also..
BTW I didnt get,to whom are u addressing the poem here "क्या करना था, क्या करते हैं, इतना ही तुम बस कह लेते"..
Almighty??

ashkd said...

@ Mukta.. O Palan hare.. khwaja mere khwaja are so lovely.. they make me lost. sukh ke sab saathi makes me more to see the realities of the world. kind of distracting.. don't know!! :P i really like the song of 'the burning train'.. 'teri hai zameen, tera aasman..' and of course jhankar beats.. 'tu hai aasman mein'.. :-)

~All the very best for the D-day tomorrow..

preposterous girl said...

Ashwini..
I have seen the advertisment boards of this show "Connected".. lemme catch it.. Haan haan chalte hai..Kuch nahi to 15 minutes of fame to mil hi jayega.. :P
I hope ki I'm as brainy as an IIT and IIM graduate.. Amen!!

preposterous girl said...

yaar ab video change bhi karo.. itna prem ho gaya is video se :P