Wednesday, March 10, 2010

worse than total agony of being in love - 5


 



The story continues to Part-5 after Part4 Part3 Part2 and Part1 



The slumber was broken with the sudden realization of teary eyes and a hint of smile.. Tears were the confusions of what was bitter, remembering of the lovely unforgettable lost past of the pain or the present setback… The smile had the show-off of the dimple.. The dimple which was once touched by his passionate care.. Likeness.. Love.. The smile was the reflection of joy that it had felt with the touch..



The touch.. The passionate touch.. The passionate first touch.. The first touch.. The first..



I was seeing those thrashed lips in front of me right now..



With broken heart, tired limbs and swollen eyes, I tried to look back at Priya who was still puzzled.. May be she was shouting for long.. I didn’t hear.. May be there was something urgent.. I didn’t notice.. May be I had to say something.. I didn’t reply.. May be she was clueless once again.. I did get puzzled too..



“What are you doing Di? I am here form last 10 mins now. Have been shouting and you are in your own world of deepening carelessness.. Are you sane or it’s once again that you losing your mind?”



What is she saying? I was right that she was shouting for long.. May be I was also right.. means I can still think, but why she doesn’t notice that I can think.. I am sane enough..



Or why she doesn’t notice what i am thinking at present.



“Oh! Is it?”



“Where have you lost Di? Kopal is also back.. She had come to you to ask for food but you didn’t pay attention to her too.. Are you ok?”



“I could faintly recall now.. Where is she now?”



“She is changing.. But where were you engrossed?”



‘Engroseed’.. Yes.. I was engrossed.. In the touch.. In the memory.. In the past.. With the One.. And in the present.. For the thought of that he would be leaving soon.. leaving for unknown.. complete unknown.. from where he won’t ever return back..



Two drops of tears.. and a lost dimple.. a pain of separation.. a lifelong.. beyond life.. killing of sensations.. reincarnation.. and two more tears..



“Can’t you see the news!”



“Ah.. Prasoon.. Oh My God!”



“Di.. Di.. are you alright? Di.. Kopal.. Call the doctor.. right now..”

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Neha said...

First time here and loving the story. But it's almost a year since you wrote the next part...when is it coming next?

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ashkd said...

@Neha.. Thanks for the first comment.. :-) I promise to update the story as soon as you update yours with the new blogpost.. :-)

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